Very nice beginning
But the delay you had on it made it collide with itself. The sounds distort, because you made the synth delay ontop of itself. Not really a pretty sound =(
Very nice of backround noises later in the song though, they world very nice. I would have liked something to tell the listener that the drums are coming up, like a drum break in or something, but it was still good and smooth.
Good work! I enjoyed this piece of electronica =D Could you check out my songs and leave a review or two? I'd really appreciate it if you did =D