Score: 10

"Nice. Very trip."

submission: The house hou ho h

date: September 3, 2006

Trip is good, trust me. Even though there are a few things that I would like to hear in this song.

It seems that you are making the instruments go to extreme lows, so that it sounds like they are just simply distortion. I'd like to actually hear the instruments that you have going, since they sound like they have a lot of content, and coul be worth listening to.

Of course, you fix that later, but its just those beginning instruments that bug me.

Could you check out my newest song called 'Battle Theme (LoD)' please? I'd really appreciate it if you did =)

Heres the URL:
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1518490

Thanks! I plan to hear from you soon, man. Keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"Very trance =)"

submission: Terminal Velocity(v1.0)

date: September 3, 2006

Its good to hear a few people here on the site that know what they are doing when they are making trance. A very nice groove you have going on in the entire body of the song, and I really do enjoy it. Has my head bobbin'.

The song is very well produced and everything, but I found it hard to catch hold of the beat of the arpeggio that you had going in the beginnnig, which I would have liked to have had a grasp on.

The filter touches you added on the melody instrument were good, but theres a little knob that says 'Q' on the Fruity Free Filter, make sure thats low. That means low resonance, and low resonace means that people save their ears cause it won't be ringing when it filters in and out.

Good work! I really enjoyed this track.

Could you check out my song called 'Battle Theme (LoD)' and leave a review for it? I'd really appreciate the feedback =)

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1518490

Theres the URL for it =D I look foreward to hearing from you soon, good sir.

Keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"No reviews?"

submission: Metal Tech(Full, fixed)

date: September 3, 2006

You should really build up some hype for a full version before you actually make one or two of them =P Next time, maybe try to get a bunch of people to listne to the song, and get them to review and stuff and get them excited for the full thing. Then when you submit the full thing, you get lots of reviews and stuff =)

Anyways, this song is really good, even though I really wold ahve prefered to hear a real guitar, and some nicer drum samples. I really don't like the Fruity Loops drum presets.

Although the guitar part is really well written. Major props for that, man.

Could you check out and review my newest song called 'Battle Theme (LoD)' please? I'd really like to get some feedback on it =)

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1518490

Thats the URL. I plan to hear from you soon =D Keep up the good work!

Score: 10

"I have never heard the original."

submission: The Ozone Bounce -(re)-

date: September 3, 2006

But it just seems like you took the original, and just sped it up. Oh well. At least the song sounds good =P

Could you check out my newest song called 'Battle Theme (LoD)' please? Heres the URL for ya: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1518490

Keep it up the good work, and I plan to hear from you soon =)

Score: 10

"Lol, seemed funny."

submission: Coffee Bean

date: September 3, 2006

Even though I couldn't really understand the voices in the backround, the songs feel and everything kind of made me chuckle inside. Made me laugh XD

As for the song, it was well mastered, I heard no clipping, and I even heard some nice controlled arps in the backround. Good work.

Could you check out my song called 'Battle Theme (LoD)' and leave a review? Heres the URL:

http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/view.php?id=1518490

Thanks man! C ya later =)

Score: 10

"Its a melody, lol"

submission: Trance Sample 1.

date: August 14, 2006

Very nice melody. But, before you throw it into a full length song (which I wold be interested in hearing, by the way) make the melody longer, and expand on those high notes, and make sure that the delay isn't fighting for sound space =) Give the delay some room to breathe.

Nice, but please try to only submit things that are either finished, or can be used in flashes =D

Keep it up!

Score: 10

"The bathroom?"

submission: A Thought in the Bathroom...

date: August 14, 2006

From the sounds of the bass, there was some nasty stuff going on in the bathroom, lol! Very nice fast groove you have going on in this song! Awesome work, keep it up!

Score: 10

"Suggestions?"

submission: Metropolis

date: August 10, 2006

Good song, I like the errie feel of the synths, but try to keep the drums simple, steady and grooey. Double kick + trance drums = kid of awkward sounding =P

Other than that, this song is crewed up and has left me crying, in a good way =P

Keep it up!

Score: 10

"3.60 to 3.80?"

submission: Major Shift

date: August 10, 2006

You've been downvoted pretty hard =( When I voted 5, it only moved up 0.20 in score =O

Anyways, to the song. Keep making more songs like this! I like the flawless mastering, and the groovy drums =) Only word of advice = get some samples, and use them instead of the default FL samples that you find in 'packs'.

Go to google and put in 'breakbeat paradise'. Click on the first link, and then find the big white word 'samples'. Then go to drumstuff, and then download your heart out.

Then put them into FL and bam, new, sexy samples =D

Keep it up! Nice melodies, here =)

Score: 10

"'Expadition'"

submission: Expadition

date: August 10, 2006

Yo man, Pretty groovy beginning =) Its nice to see that you aren't using the standard 4 by 4 kick in your song here =D The rising strings worked well, I think.

But theres one thing you should try: After you do a rise string, don't just like, keep the song going the way it was. Add on open hi hat on the offbeat, or a ride on every beat. Add some more percussion to make people bob their head =)

Good work man! Keep it up!